Headaches and Heart Breaks

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the_hoodANDsheild
Junior Member

since 2006-03-08

Posts 25
Canada

0 posted 2006-04-15 03:08 AM

Did I wrong you with the truth?
I asked for your heart.
You replied with silence.
The quiet still hurts more then words ever would.

Second guessing,
Insomniac slumber.
Headaches,
And Heart Breaks.

I promise myself I wont care,
I try to distract myself from your stare
I’m tired of being scared.
I’m tired of reliving the little things that we shared.

I will pretend its not forever
And I’ll pull myself together
And I’ll say that I’ll forget her
I’ll breathe!

And ill say she never hurt me
And look at it as learning
And laugh about the good and the bad
No matter how much she has made me sad.

Second guessing,
Insomniac slumber.
Headaches,
And Heart Breaks.

But her eyes will forever haunt
My heart they will forever taunt.
This is my goodbye,
Never going to see you again.

This is my goodbye.

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

1 posted 2006-04-15 09:03 AM

nice, very touching...curiouse

i'm looking for you...always...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2006-04-15 11:36 AM

"The quiet still hurts more then words ever would."

yes...it sure does...understand this

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

3 posted 2006-04-15 12:35 PM

Its good. I understand how you feel. The flow of this was really nice. Its organization is really good. Nice write.

Jessica

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

4 posted 2006-04-15 01:40 PM

It’s really sad. I hope your doing better?
You poem was fantastic. I don’t think there is any thing you could make better.
I love reading your poems and only wish you would post more.

*leah

the_hoodANDsheild
Junior Member

since 2006-03-08

Posts 25
Canada

5 posted 2006-04-15 10:34 PM

Thankyou all for your comments...again! I just wrote this early this morning because I really CANT get her out of my head...but i am trying.

@aliway: I dont like posting lots of poems because then the ones that I do post lose their importance in a way. It also really hurts to write sometimes. I sometimes dont write for weeks at a time just because I dont want to face the truths that I write. I guess my honesty though is what makes my poems good to read, because I honestly mean every word I say.

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

6 posted 2006-04-16 01:06 AM

To the first thing most of my first pomes were about a guy how I held my mind, so I sort of know what you’re going through.

With me, my poems help me move on, and let me let go of build up emotions.
I hate exacting reality sometimes, hoping that it’s not true but my poems help me dele with it.  (I think I just said the same thing twice)

I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it, in till that guy and all these problems stared.  Now poetry and friends are the only thing keeping me safe and san.

With here, try to find something else to do and think about. With me I just found some one who’s better to think about. I now it’s hard but it will get better and you’ll move on

I hope I’ve helped but I don’t think I did.
If you need someone to talk to with your problems you can come to me.
wow I sound like a stoker with that.

*leah

the_hoodANDsheild
Junior Member

since 2006-03-08

Posts 25
Canada

7 posted 2006-04-16 02:00 AM

Thankyou for your advice...and i might ask you for more advice in the future. And you DONT sound like a stalker lol

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

8 posted 2006-04-16 02:08 AM

Wow I have bad spelling. Thank you for that and I hope to hear from you again if from a poem or for just talking.

*leah

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