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Teen Poetry #7

happy song

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

0 posted 2006-04-10 10:10 PM

Happy bunny hear me sing
Happy bunny come to me
Happy bunny play with me
Happy bunny be with me

Now you’ve heard my bunny song
How unhappy could you be
Now lesson to my doggy song
Come on lets hear you sing

Happy doggy here with me
Happy doggy walk with me
Happy doggy sing with me
Happy doggy you’re with me

Now you’ve heard my happy song
Now you’re happy as could be
Now you’re sing happy songs just like me
Come on lets dance around

There’s so much to thee
But so little to see
Will you open up
Or just hide from me

*leah

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

1 posted 2006-04-10 10:32 PM

wow what??? hahaha

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-04-12 05:29 PM

w0w! Made me smile

lolz, like one spelling error or something or other, but, hey, anything that can make me smile is awesome!

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aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

3 posted 2006-04-15 01:14 AM

I like it. I was having a bad day so I thought why not write a funny poem to make me feel batter. So it really means nothing but some thing to laugh at

*Leah

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

4 posted 2006-04-15 03:54 PM

lolololol

I really needed to laugh. You song helped me do that. That's really creative. You could turn it into a childrns song. One spelling error though, lesson I think is supposed to be listen.

Jessica

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

5 posted 2006-04-15 04:33 PM

I made some one laugh
Woo how

*leah

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