being wrong, loving a guy that was a lie

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Teen Poetry #7

being wrong, loving a guy that was a lie

BlackEyedBueaty07
Junior Member

since 2006-04-05

Posts 27
rittman, ohio

0 posted 2006-04-12 06:19 PM

I was wrong

by: kerry

To:Vince

i wanted to be together
/Because i love you
/i wanted to be together forever
/But i was a fool to think you would
/We talked about it all the time
/How it'd be so cool if we were together forever
/And you told me you'd never leave
/but that was i lie i believed
/but i was wrong
/To go along with all your tricks
/its just a game
/you need to get all the girls
/Just like collecting baseball cards
/and maybe i was wrong
/And maybe girls should sreve the guys
/yeah you think thats fair
/but your out of your mind
/Girls have the same rights as guys
/but guys dont have the same eyes
/they only look at
/sex
/they only see
/looks
/they only think
/sex
/they only wish to have all the girls
/but maybe i was wrong
/to be with someone
/maybe i should go solo
/because they wont follow me
/if i dont to be with someone
/and maybe i was wrong
/to listen to you cry
/About how youd die
/for me
/but i dont know anymore
/should i take you back?
/Or will you just be a lie?
/I just dont understand
/Why youd promise all this stuff
/Then walk away in pain
/Knowing your breaking my heart
/knowing i know
/its a game
/and maybe i was wrong
/maybe i was wrong
/you promised me youd never leave
/and you also said to me
/we'd get married
/and you said
/we would have a baby
/but now you left me
/and now you want me
/and i dont know wich way to go
/maybe i was wrong
/to go along
/and be with you
/you left me for some other girl
/But whats going on?
/Maybe i was wrong
/About you
/but i was the fool to fall for you....

- sry it is so long, its actually a song...hehe... and this isnt to all guys, just the cheating, lieing, using, and abusing ones who just want sex, this is to my ex boyfriend, he left me for this ugly girl...but thats my story-

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-04-12 08:17 PM

Its very long. I'm sorry that you have that kind of an ex. Will he ever even read this? Or hear it? You have a lot of songs posted are you in a band or are you a solo artist? Back to the poem/song. I would say that its a bit repetetive if it was a poem, but its also a song so I'm confused and am going to shut up now. The story about your ex, throw some creative things in there (or you can keep it how it is) and post it in the prose section. Unless it is completely boring then you should never mention it again. LOL.

Jessica

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