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we could never say goodbye...
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we could never say goodbye... |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
i remember every single fleeting glance [y o u w a n t e d m e] to never doubt this (our) love again how could i stand up— riding against the sea of your sweet words will the end never reveal the truth behind those eyes? i needed your touch to feel alive did you know, love? did you know how my heart would fly into my stomach at the sound of your name? these mind games make me wonder what is really in your soul… the lust the hurt the lust the hurt will the end never reveal the truth behind those eyes? always catching me by surprise i can live i can stand i can live i can stand without your hands tell me what has your love ever meant pent up smiles bent apart hearts we knew it from the start, love we knew it from the start… |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
Cool Kelly. I don't really get a little part of it, but the rest is sweet. Do you have a pattern or something for your stanzas? It could flow better in some parts. Nice write. Jessica |
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