This emotion is worth nothing

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Teen Poetry #7

This emotion is worth nothing

acid_tears_i_cry
Junior Member

since 2005-11-25

Posts 24
United States, UT

0 posted 2006-03-30 01:17 PM

Dear Depression,
I am writing to inform u that, I no longer need ur presence...Its been awhile now and I feel that I should now be on my own for awhile...I know...I know...Its hard for me too...But Im afraid to let u knoew this but ur doing nuthing but hurting me...I feel llost when ur around...I feel heavy thoughts on my chest...I cant breathe near ur intense thoughts of suicide...and I cant take controle of ur mind....Im sry but this is just how things have to be...GOODBYE!!!
By: Malinda Peterson

P.s.. If things were only this easy.... :'(

Can you read the word "loneliness" and not think of a dark room?

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

1 posted 2006-03-30 01:22 PM

i know..i'm feeling just that right now, and i hate it but i keep reminding my self that it will go away...all the best and don't think about it too much cause it only makes it worse for me, don't know about you.

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

2 posted 2006-03-30 05:15 PM

this is very cute. So true.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

3 posted 2006-03-30 11:08 PM

I liked this a lot.. I loved how you put it in letter form.. the only thing I suggest is Spelling/Grammar check.. then with a little polish this could be a great piece.. keep it up..

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

4 posted 2006-04-09 02:50 PM

I know what you mean. I would write something about spelling here, but I don't excatly think that you cared about spelling when you where writing this so I'll leave it blank.__________________.______________________________________________________________.
Jessica

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

5 posted 2006-04-09 06:22 PM

This made me smile but sad at the same time. How I wish life could be like this!

Like Heather said, I love how you put this in letter form. Also, good job on expression.

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