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Teen Poetry #7

Don't You?

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

0 posted 2006-04-09 02:45 AM

Don't you wnna know me?
don't you wnna let me get you back?
don't you wnna run here?
don't you wnna fill my big gap?
don't you wnna hear me?
don't you wnna get back on the track?
don't you wnna feel me?
don't you wnna tell me that your okay?
I cant answer all these questions by myself so please please help!

I wnna see you and speak to you ask you what I did wrong
but I cant so just come here and I will ask you a few things before you get the wrong idea and go, you gotta hear it all!

I will be waiting but the thing is I cant wait all my life so try hurry it up for me!!!

x0x0
Free_Spirit07
~%#*So far from perfect!*#%~
~%#*So far from life and living!*#%~

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-04-09 01:16 PM

I dont really understand your point. I mean I understand it I just don't get it. Could you explain more? I think that your poem could have been better organized. I know I say that a lot but it's because it's true. So don't take it personaly. And I think that you forgot to add an a in the word wanna. you spelled it wnna.

Jessica

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