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Seeing you again
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Seeing you again |
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Danielle Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 80Providence, RI, USA |
Seeing your blue eyes again... For a moment everything felt the way it did so long ago I felt as though you belonged to me and I belonged to you You smiled... So innocently, so sweetly It made my heart smile in some small way... When you laughed... I remembered all those times I made you laugh All the fun we used to have Life was great when we were together... When we were unstoppable Unforgettable Wonderful Those days have long since pasted but seeing you brought the memories back in floods For a time you were all I could think of The only thing on my mind... Though it was wrong I couldn't help but think about the what if's I know that there will never be an us again... You have your life... And I..well I have mine That's the way it was meant to be But though it all I would still like you to know... That I will always, no matter what happens, love you Blessed Be Those Who |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I liked it  |
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lauren03 Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 64oh, usa |
awww.......... your gonna make me cry, i'm going through a little something like that and it makes me sad. good write keep it up. |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
the was it was meant to be.......ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh |
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Ally Stone Junior Member
since 2003-10-20
Posts 48D.C. |
ah yes...hearts aching like creaky old doors. Good write, keep it up! ---A--- |
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kadafi09 Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 143California, United States |
Your poem brought memories of my ex-girlfriend. I kinda miss her, but I've moved on. Good poem. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Reading this poem brought tears to my eyes. Great work! ~Jess  "Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
It was very good, and sad! I hope to see more! ~KISSA~ |
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