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muttering tell me whatcha think! |
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broken627 Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 66Eugene Oregon 
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I saw you today i lost all track of words i had no idea what to say so all i muttered was hey i cant eat i cant sleep these constant thoughts of you continue to creep cant i get through one day without you passing through my head your feelings for me are dead i wanna talk to you but you dont seem to care when i try you just sit there with a blank stare its obvious now that youve moved on and you and i are completly done Ill be alright ill be just fine ill try and find something that will consume all my time but before i let go i want you to know not a day goes by that i dont think of you -*-I love you-*- Hey guys thanks so much for all the feedback i cant tell you how much i appreciate it! -*-Lotsa Love-*- -*-Broken627-*- |
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Ally Stone Junior Member
since 2003-10-20
Posts 48D.C. |
Let me just suggest a color other than pink for posting. It's cool and all, but it hurts my eyes after a while. Sorry to sound so old! --a-- |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Nice, Very good poem. And hey pink is that bad people just need to chill. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Awesome poem! I loved it, it was good, but sad! I hope to see a lot more. ~kissa~ |
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