Teen Poetry #7 |
depression |
BlackEyedBueaty07 Junior Member
since 2006-04-05
Posts 27rittman, ohio |
Left in the Dust by: kerry cookro To: all mt friends who left me... And my friend kayla Sitting here between these four walls Curled up in a ball Screaming inside my head Wondering when im gonna be dead. People around me that care People around me that dont. Left in the dust But im coming up. Friends leave me Friends die People cry. But im left in the dust Not you. So, dont say your life sucks more than mine... |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
I like the last line "So don't say your life sucks worse than mine" that flows very well. I think that the whole poem is good. Just a question, do any of your friends have an account here? would they read them if not? Jessica |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
This is a sad poem. The last line is my fav. too *leah |
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