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BlackEyedBueaty07
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0 posted 2006-04-08 09:01 PM


Left in the Dust

by: kerry cookro
To: all mt friends who left me... And my friend kayla

Sitting here between these four walls
Curled up in a ball
Screaming inside my head
Wondering when im gonna be dead.

People around me that care
People around me that dont.

Left in the dust
But im coming up.

Friends leave me
Friends die
People cry.

But im left in the dust
Not you.
So, dont say your life sucks more than mine...


© Copyright 2006 kerry lynn cookro - All Rights Reserved
latteaddict213
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1 posted 2006-04-08 09:05 PM


I like the last line "So don't say your life sucks worse than mine" that flows very well. I think that the whole poem is good. Just a question, do any of your friends have an account here? would they read them if not?

                 Jessica

aliway
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since 2006-03-05
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2 posted 2006-04-19 11:34 PM


This is a sad poem. The last line is my fav. too

*leah

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