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Teen Poetry #7

Title: Everything stopped

BlackEyedBueaty07
Junior Member

since 2006-04-05

Posts 27
rittman, ohio

0 posted 2006-04-08 09:25 PM

Everthing stopped

by: kerry cookro
To: Kayla Phillips

I hate when you say
Your life sucks
More than mine.

And when you do
I get all depressed

And inside
I want to cry
But i hold it in
i hold it in.

But when you say that
I think about my past
And whats coming tomorrow.

And you tell me
To work on my assingments
But i ignore you

'Fine, ruin your life!'

'But its already ruined...'

The day Matt died
Everything stopped
Even though everything was moving.

You understand
But not all the time
Like now
Like then

I just need to know that
He's alright
They're alright
im alright
your alright.

But are we all
Or do we fake?
As we fall?

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-04-08 09:37 PM

Deep. Its good. Might be able to have a bit more structure. I hope you can recover from your loss allrigh. Its good to tell somene how you feel. I know it sounds stupid but it really does help.

Jessica

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

2 posted 2006-04-19 11:58 PM

I agree with Jessica on every thing. It’s a sad poem.
Hope you do recover all right.

*Leah

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