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Teen Poetry #7

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Lindsay
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 59
South Dakota

0 posted 2006-04-06 10:40 PM

Why does this hurt so much
Why can’t I say goodbye
Can’t even think about you without a tear in my eye
I don’t how I could be stupid to let you go
I guess I was just scared
Didn’t know someone could make me feel like you do
It was easier just to push you away
Now all I have left is the memories of me and you
And the regrets of giving you up

I don't know much at all, I don't know wrong from right, All I know is that I love you tonight
-Good Charlotte

[This message has been edited by Lindsay (04-08-2006 12:23 AM).]

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

1 posted 2006-04-06 10:54 PM

Sad but a good poem.
I think you should get read of the “is” in the first line. It doesn’t work.

*leah

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

2 posted 2006-04-08 06:26 PM

Its nice. Quite sad, but nice. It's a great thing for you to be able to let your emotions out. either in spoken words or on paper. Very nice write.

Jessica

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