Teen Poetry #7 |
My religion |
bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
This is a bit confusing but bear with me! I can't keep it inside No I cant keep it to myself I've gotta tell the world, I'm not keeping this on my shelf I want to tell the world How Christ died for you and me But sometimes I get scared cause people call me crazy I'm not afraid to stand up for God Nor any of my beliefs My life reflects my religion I don't hide it underneath Christ died for u and me And rose again the third day I can do nothing But stand and give him praise He loves us and wants us To turn to him in prayer But I notice that alot Of us are just scared Not me though- I'm not afraid I want the riches in Heaven nope, I love the Lord and i'm proud of my religion |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
This was a great poem. That’s good you believe strong in your religion. I wish I could but I find myself questing him a lot. *leah We seek peace, knowing that peace is the climate of freedom. |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
i know how you feel Leah. my grandma is a really strong Cathlic. i belive in God just don't always think he likes me. your poem is really nice.it flows well and i don't think there are any spelling errors so its truely a nice write. Jessica |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey, This is such an awesome poem! Leah, Jessica, I know exactly how you both feel, but it is okay to ask questions of what God is really doing, there is no law that says you can’t Just remember even when you are mad at him he always loves you, i know that sounds so preacherish but it is true, no matter what happens. Bekahlekah45 you have amazing talent! You have one or two spelling errors that you might like to fix. My all time favorite line in your poem is, “I want to tell the world How Christ died for you and me But sometimes I get scared cause people call me crazy” maybe because I can relate to this part a lot. It makes me really sad though, that people would consider you crazy just because you believe in God. Good job, I hope to see more of your posts in the future! @-->--- |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
Thank you guys soooo much! that means alot. : ) |
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