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sometimesitslonely Junior Member
since 2005-12-27
Posts 41USA |
At times the world is broken, but he always says it can be fixed. At times the rain floods me, but he smiles and the sun is out. At times I feel out casted, but he comes and I feel wanted. At times my last breath is taken, he stores me up again. At times my hands are shaking, he gives me strength again. My love, ever lasting, forever never dying. This smile is fake, |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
This is such a sweet poem... I like the end a lot though! It might not rhyme as well as the rest, but i loved it. Keep writing~ @-->--- |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
What a beautiful, sweet poem! Loved it!  ~Alli~ |
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BlackEyedBueaty07 Junior Member
since 2006-04-05
Posts 27rittman, ohio |
this is a very good poem. its very inspiring! keep up the good work! -kerry- |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
its a very sweet poem. nice to read. Jessica |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
Great poem it had so much love in it, I hope one day I can feel the same as you do for him. *leah |
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