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Teen Poetry #7

I Wish

mgoodman1989
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 93
Iowa, USA

0 posted 2006-03-31 07:18 PM

Make believe can be real
a handsome prince exists
a broken heart can't last forever
the pain does desist

One day he'll walk inside
your heart, kept locked away
he'll tell you your his only one
that he'll be there each day

Don't feel bad if he leaves
forever's not that long
when something better comes his way
blink and he'll be gone

Hold on tight while it lasts
keep him by your side
never ever let him go
dont let him see you cry

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-04-01 12:08 PM

Hey,

I really like this poem, it’s kind of sad, but true, that now days forever isn’t really forever.
I felt like this was such a bitter/sweet poem, but I really enjoyed it.

No criticism here, everything just seems to fit right where you put it, and it flows very well.

Thank you for sharing!

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