Teen Poetry #7 |
i wish i could find you.. |
curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
I thought I had lost everything, I thought that life could not get any worse, I thought that the world was a mean, deceitful and miserable place, I was in hell, Until I was in heaven I’m on cloud 9 and still flying high The world is such a giving and wonderfully beautiful place I have everything I ever I wanted, I’m overjoyed with laughter And I could never be any happier Because I found you. I found joy, And I found happiness, I found life The moment you came over to me. (i so wish this happened to me) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You are young..it will happen ..be patient M |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thankyou, i guess i just have so much craving for life, curiouse |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and that's a good thing...just be patient, you have a whole lot of living ahead of you... and much fun included in it. hugs M |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I feel like this poem is so hollow, and i realized why, afterwards when you said you wish this had happened. I agree with the other person who posted, you are young, good things will happen, and bad things. You just have to get back on your feet afterwards. I hope you find the happiness you are looking for. @-->--- |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Like everyone else has said, give it time and it will happen. ~Alli~ |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
i agree with all of ya. you guys post such nice things. Jessica |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thankyou for your caring words and advice guys i enjoyed it curiouse |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
In agree with them but you now have someone so it did happen to, I think I’m so lost *Leah |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
yes i wrote this poem a while back and it has happened to me thankyou i'm looking for you...always... |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
interesting. was not rhyming really...sorta had a weird flow....but i liked it and me being me ... was mean and im SO sorry...coz poems actually don't have to rhyme. it was well like i said interesting...in a GOOD way that is..lol cya round! x0x0 |
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