Teen Poetry #7 |
You’re That Special Friend |
bashlovesemma Junior Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 25 |
For a long time now, I’ve thought upon you as a great friend, And that I wanted you to know, We’ve been through some taught times, But we made it through, You chased away my fears, You helped me through sadness, But you weren’t there to see my tears, You’re a great friend; you’re a real star, I was hoisted up into the stars, That’s where we met, Your smile, is brighter than the stars it’s self Each time you smile I can’t help but smile too, I’m not sure, I’ll always be a best friend to you, I know I’m not perfect, But, This much it true, When life gets you down, And there’s nowhere to turn, I’ll help you though and, I’ll share your concern. Sean |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey! This was a great poem, i loved the whole thing. My favorite lines were, "I’ll always be a best friend to you, I know I’m not perfect, But, This much it true, When life gets you down, And there’s nowhere to turn, I’ll help you though and, I’ll share your concern.", that is amazing how you can admit your not perfect, but you will always be there for your friend. Well, not amazing, but it is cool that you can admit that you are not perfect. Thanks for sharing Btw, you have one spelling error @-->--- |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Awesome write! I love friendship poems and this one was no exception. It really relates to me and my friends! ~Alli~ |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
definitely enjoyed this poem. great job! |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
BEAUTIFULL....CURIOUSE |
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