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bekahlekah45
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0 posted 2006-03-23 05:59 PM


"I love you", He said
And I knew it was true
I slowly turned his way
And answered, "I love you too"

He took my hand in his
And held it close by his side
I was sure he was the one
And that is no lie

He kissed me softly and gently
But it held so much love
I loved him so dearly
He must have been sent from above

Thank you Lord, I whispered,
For giving him to me
I'll cherish him forever
And everyone shall see

© Copyright 2006 Rebekah - All Rights Reserved
stargal
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since 2006-03-06
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1 posted 2006-03-23 06:02 PM


This is a really sweet poem! I love the last stanza most though

Keep writing~

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*Alli4000*
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2 posted 2006-03-23 06:20 PM


Wow! Awesome write, I really, really loved this one.
Putting in my library, hope it's alright.

~Alli~

bekahlekah45
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since 2006-03-14
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3 posted 2006-03-23 06:20 PM


thanks! i'm glad y'all like it!
curiouse
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4 posted 2006-03-28 11:58 AM


that was wonderfull,lovely poem,
well done,
Curiouse

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