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Free_Spirit07
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since 2006-01-29
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The middle of my mind!

0 posted 2006-02-10 12:57 PM



I love you don't get me wrong
I miss you and want you to come home
Where are you when I need a hand to hold?
Where are you when i am feeling cold?
Where  are you when I call out and ring you on your phone?

why don't you come and find me? And we can be a family
why is it always me that makes the first move
and always ends up screwed

I find myself holding my own hand when im scared
and when I think its near the end
I pray and tell God that I love you
and im Sorry for the things I have done
I cry all night just wishing you will come home
I cry and ask you what i did that was wrong
I listen out for an answer and find that there is none

so I live each day without you here
I live each day with a whole lot of fear that if I make the move again
I will end up in so much more pain and find out that you don't want me,
you don't want me messing up your game

so all I have to say is I love you both
and miss you each and every day!

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Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
Posts 149
Washington, USA
1 posted 2006-02-10 03:49 AM



I really liked this a lot. It really reminded me of my ex boyfriend and the situation I was in while dating him. Chin Up.

Steph

XxnoraxX
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since 2006-01-24
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2 posted 2006-02-10 09:55 PM


Great poem!  I can so relate.  I rly loved this- awesome job!

XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

latteaddict213
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3 posted 2006-03-09 02:32 PM


can relate. awsome write

           Jessica    
            
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

ShelbyLynn13
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since 2006-02-15
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US, Colorodo
4 posted 2006-03-23 05:13 PM


latte how do you relate? awesome write.

every one is special in their own  way!!!

*Alli4000*
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5 posted 2006-03-23 06:15 PM


Very nice one, keep posting!

~Alli~

Free_Spirit07
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The middle of my mind!
6 posted 2006-03-28 01:38 AM


Thanks everyone -
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