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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
something inside is breaking something inside is acing something inside is a part of me faking something inside is people im blaming something inside is my fault not theirs something inside is making me scared something inside is tearing me down something inside is feeling like the darkest cloud something inside is hid from the crowd something inside is freaking me out something inside I cant figure out something inside I cant let out something's inside and im afraid to say its going to have to stay there until it someday pops out! x0x0 |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hi, I don’t know what you intention was on this poem, but let me just say it made a big impression on me! In my own, mixed up confused way, I can relate a lot to what you’re saying… Thanks for sharing P.S. You have a couple spelling errors. @-->--- |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Hey there.....thank you  And sorry bout the spelling  x0x0 |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Yes, good write. I can relate!  ~Alli~ |
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