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No Help From Daddy
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No Help From Daddy |
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Gottigirl505 New Member
since 2006-02-06
Posts 4New Mexico, Us |
You left me all alone, I wasn’t even three, I’m your flesh and blood, Why don’t you love me? You never call to say hi, Or even on holidays, All I did was sigh, On my birthday the month after may Now I sit here in my home, With my husband and my child, Dreaming of the father of my own, And how your love for me was mild. “Your better off without him” everybody tells me, But they don’t know you like I do, They don’t see what I see, Cause I see a man that needs to get a clue. You’re my father, No doubting that, But now you’re just a bother. And you’re thrown out like an unwanted cat. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Welcome to Passions. This is a very powerful and interesting first post, I’m looking forward to reading more of your writing  Andrew |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
Great Job!!! Welcome to PIP!!! I loved this poem sooo much! Hope to hear more of yours in the future- XoXo, |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
Welcome to pip!how is the weather in Mexico? Great first post. very nice.  Jessica |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Yow! Nice post! Love the poem, i can so relate to it! Keep postin' would love to see more  @-->--- |
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helenadepp Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 59durham, england |
This was interesting. I felt that it flowed well until the last stanza, maybe thats just me though? Anyways nice write! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice first post. Welcome to Pip!  ~Alli~ |
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