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Free_Spirit07
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since 2006-01-29
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The middle of my mind!

0 posted 2006-03-17 07:05 PM



I blow my candles out each year and always wish for you
Its been 14 years now and still has not come true
you guys are my one and only wish but one that wont come true
I remember when I was little I wasted all my dandelions on you two


I know you know the truth
I don't have to waste my time on telling you
I know you know how I feel
so I wont bother explaining it to you


but what is it what did I do?
what was so hard for you?
why did you have to leave me? when you know how much you mean to me
why cant you just try? and finally open your eyes
why cant you open up? tell it to my face
I know that I done something and that I am a disgrace
but just why cant you tell me?
I will go out of my way to change!

x0x0
Free_Spirit07    
~%#*So far from perfect!*#%~
~%#*So far from life and living!*#%~

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stargal
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since 2006-03-06
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1 posted 2006-03-18 02:34 PM


I really like this poem…
It’s one for my library!


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*Alli4000*
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2 posted 2006-03-19 12:05 PM


Excellent write, I can really relate to this, having a brother of my own.

~Alli~

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