Teen Poetry #7 |
My Fate |
sometimesitslonely Junior Member
since 2005-12-27
Posts 41USA |
When I break your heart, please don't get bitter, it's just how I am, and it's how I'll always be. You say to give it time, he's just focus on other things, I have no more time to give, for I'll be waiting, until death rings. And if he never puts a flower on my grave, if he never shed a tear, know that I had to wait, and now alone is my fate. This smile is fake, |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
woah- this is such a good sad poem- keep it up XoXo, |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Ah huh, i agree x0x0 free_Spirit07 fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here! |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
Deep! I love it! Jessica |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
I loved this poem. I had to read it twice to make sure I was getting to right idea. but it was great. Keep it up.. ~Heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
i really liked this poem! short, sad, bitter sweet... keep up the good work @-->--- |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Awesome write, very nice job. ~Alli~ |
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