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sometimesitslonely
Junior Member

since 2005-12-27

Posts 41
USA

0 posted 2006-01-04 07:48 PM

When I break your heart,
please don't get bitter,
it's just how I am,
and it's how I'll always be.

You say to give it time,
he's just focus on other things,
I have no more time to give,
for I'll be waiting,
until death rings.

And if he never puts a flower on my grave,
if he never shed a tear,
know that I had to wait,
and now alone is my fate.

This smile is fake,
These tears aren't.

© Copyright 2006 sometimesitslonely - All Rights Reserved

XxnoraxX
Member

since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

1 posted 2006-02-12 04:56 PM

woah- this is such a good sad poem- keep it up

XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

2 posted 2006-02-12 11:30 PM

Ah huh, i agree

x0x0
free_Spirit07

fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here!

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Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

3 posted 2006-03-09 02:46 PM

Deep! I love it!

           Jessica

    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

4 posted 2006-03-09 07:26 PM

I loved this poem. I had to read it twice to make sure I was getting to right idea. but it was great. Keep it up..

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

5 posted 2006-03-18 02:45 PM

i really liked this poem!
short, sad, bitter sweet...

keep up the good work

@-->---

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2006-03-19 12:06 PM

Awesome write, very nice job.

~Alli~

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