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Teen Poetry #7

Dreams

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-11-17 06:52 AM

Warped –
To your desire.
Changed –
No longer safe.

My dreams are no longer mine,
They’ve become nightmares,
Nightmares or the past –
What do you make of them?

Forsaken –
By your will.
Departed –
From my mind.

My dreams are no longer mine,
They’ve become nightmares,
Nightmares or the past –
What do you make of them?

Torn…
Between…
Illusion…
And…
Reality…
SOMEBODY HELP ME!!!

My dreams are no longer mine,
They are what you make them.

I soak up all the pain, and accept it in silence~DMX

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-11-17 10:38 AM

yep...the only thing we can do is get it on the floor.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2003-11-18 08:58 PM

i liked all of it except for the "torn..."
the rest was really really good. great work

now im alone, but not lonely like before

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

3 posted 2003-11-19 10:34 AM

This was a really good poem, Staci. I enjoyed it a lot. Great write.

~J.Lynn

**To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.**

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