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mgoodman1989
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 93
Iowa, USA

0 posted 2006-03-11 03:48 PM

Everything worth fighting for
ends with aches and pains
nothing good can last forever
hearts all break the same

You might think he's special
and give him all of you
he'll become your whole world
then rip your heart in two

One day you hope he'll realize
he wants you by his side
he cannot live without you
his feelings he cannot hide

Close your eyes to see his face
imagine his perfect kiss
remember how he made you cry
and that its him you miss

Everything worth fighting for
ends with aches and pains
nothing good can last forever
hearts all break the same.

SEA

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1 posted 2006-03-11 05:47 PM

Welcome!

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stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-03-11 11:41 PM

Can i shake your hand?

~

Let me just say wow... it is almost like song lyrics instead of a poem! it could be both... i enjoyed reading it

Please post more often!

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mgoodman1989
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 93
Iowa, USA

3 posted 2006-03-12 09:04 AM

Thanks Stargal, I have read some of your poetry and they are really good poems, so the fact that you liked mine means a lot to me. Thanks again!

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

4 posted 2006-03-12 10:56 AM

i could be both.

. Welcome to pip....i guess. it says this is your first post but i've read your work somewhere else...oh well. this is really well writen i like it aot.

           Jessica

    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

sometimesitslonely
Junior Member

since 2005-12-27

Posts 41
USA

5 posted 2006-03-12 12:51 PM

This was amazing. Only, I think it'd flow a tad bit better if when you say "hearts all break the same" it's "all hearts break the same" the wording just fits a bit better. But, this poem was amazing. I loved it!

This smile is fake,
These tears aren't.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

6 posted 2006-03-12 02:10 PM

I loved this poem.. It was great..

Post more....

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

helenadepp
Member

since 2006-01-16

Posts 59
durham, england

7 posted 2006-03-14 04:37 PM

This is great! Definetly a one for the library! It has a steady flow throughout, well done!..i mean, wow!

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2006-03-14 06:08 PM

Wonderful poem...I can relate to it very much.

Welcome to Pip!

mgoodman1989
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 93
Iowa, USA

9 posted 2006-03-14 06:41 PM

Thanks a bunch.. Everyone has done a great job of making me feel welcome btw.. thanks all for the great comments...

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