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Teen Poetry #7

Truthful Lies

BlueRhapsody
New Member

since 2006-02-13

Posts 4
Nevada, USA

0 posted 2006-03-08 02:47 AM

All this life and before
I would be searching for unexisting things
At time I would pretend to cry
Those imaginary tears would then leave rainbows,
But my imagination keeps telling me truths
Truths about all my lies
Those lies feel like mist after rain
And the smell before rain
I then look into the water
There stands no reflection

~
Here is one of my recent works ^^, I'll be looking more into my old work and posting it on here

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-03-08 11:17 AM

Hey,

Thanks for posting on mine...

But your poem, ummm... it jumps around a little bit.

It's really deep though, i like that.

Can't wait to see some more of your poems!

Keep writing

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latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

2 posted 2006-03-08 07:06 PM

its deep but does jump around a bit

           Jessica

    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

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