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littlelauren Junior Member
since 2005-12-30
Posts 25 |
Why do you keep drinking you're only making yourself sad your hurting everyone around you because drinking is bad Everytime that you get drunk you try and hurt everyone around you why do you keep doing this do you even reaslise what you do? You keep on telling me you love me again and again so why do you keep saying this stuff you're the one causeing my pain You ask me why I do this and again I lie to you I tell you it's myself causeing me pain when really it is you So please just stop the drinking and next time you lift the glass remember it's me you're hurting so set it down at last |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
WOW! that is so awesome and deep! XxnoraxX |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Yea hard out! I know he pain and hurt that it causes. It hurts and its hard to tell them, its weird as  x0x0 Free_Spirit07 p.s oh i aint been through that...but its kinda the same in its own way i feel 4 u  |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
Deep! And its supporting a great cause! i love things that do that! Jessica |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Omgosh! I once was in a relationship like that so I can relate to your poem a lot! Okay, normally I tell everyone some fault about their poem, this one I am not going too. It expresses deep thoughts and emotions and does not need to be tainted by my words. All I can say is keep up the good work @-->--- |
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