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Teen Poetry #7

Dreams

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

0 posted 2006-03-07 05:20 PM

I feel safe with you
like all is not lost
holding me in your gentle arms
nothing can go wrong
a kiss from you
brings heaven to my heart
stay with me
happiness will be ever ours

[This message has been edited by aliway (03-07-2006 06:54 PM).]

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-03-07 05:32 PM

short but sweet. nice write

Jessica

    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-03-07 05:40 PM

Really sweet... I like it, but keep in mind to check your spelling(People are going to hate me! on almost all my posts i say check your spelling...Just watch, i will mess up and spell something really wierd)!

This would also be a good poem to add more too!

It has nice flow though. It's been a pleasure reading

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