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Teen Poetry #7

The Name

silentmage13
Junior Member

since 2005-11-20

Posts 14
Florida

0 posted 2006-03-03 04:02 PM

Kiss the sky and caress the sea.
Bathe in the wind's sweet breeze.
Now come and follow me.
We'll dance in the moonlight
And make love in the trees.
By the next day I will know you.
Can you say you will know me?
My heart will be yours to hold,
For never have I seen such beauty
As you have given me in a day.
I will provide your food and shelter
For as long as you promise to stay.
Do you know me? Who can say?
For I was lost so long ago
And none really knew my name.
I am Peace, the long forgotten in war.
Please do not leave and quit our game.
The world no longer holds joy
And you'll return and not be the same.
Leave me not and you will know
What I have shown too few:
My admirations, intentions... My name.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2006-03-03 06:52 PM

wow. this was really good. it made you want to read more and more. each line kept yuo reading.
the imagery was amazing.

*karissa*

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

2 posted 2006-03-03 10:19 PM

great first write. nice work. And welcome to pip

           Jessica
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

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