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neil.gd
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since 2006-02-27
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southern leyte, philippines
0 posted 2006-03-02 11:45 PM

love...

     look at it.,
      fantastic, sweet, tempting...

love...
  
      listen to it,
       hear it echoeng sounds
        find hard to accept for the longing soul..


love...

     stop!
      take a break on me
       it hurts till i miss one
         burns in my eyes, vanish in the wind..
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since 2006-02-17
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1 posted 2006-03-04 11:06 PM

nice! i like how you began each with

Love....

yeah thats awsome

           Jessica    
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??
neil.gd
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since 2006-02-27
Posts 16
southern leyte, philippines
2 posted 2006-03-05 11:08 PM

salamat...(thank you!!!)
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