Teen Poetry #7 |
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drowningmonky Junior Member
since 2006-03-02
Posts 14miami, florida |
She's 14 young and inexperienced He's 18 wild and carefree She loves him He find her inferior yeah she's 4 years younger then him and sure love is more than just a tender kiss but she can't help it now cause she is breaking down and she just wants him now. They went out for a while now He made her feel as if she was in heaven but secretly he wanted more from her and she wasnt willing to give herself up she let him touch her and she let him hold her but never will she let him own her take it away after only 3 weeks that was imposible for her to deal with. She couldnt bear it what about her decency. Her parents didnt know Her friends told her it was wrong and that he was to old but age doesnt matter when all u want is love and age only kills and separates you from those you love. she hoped it would last forever. her and him in time become a strong bond never break apart. she had so many plans in her innocent young head. never did she think about his true intentions. she just believed that he was her destiny. how foolish innocence can be and how much people can take advantage of it,blinding it sure is. All her dreams were stepped on, ran over by an imaginary truck leaving her in some invicible road waiting for the chance to get back up. Now she sits at home in her bed not eating and with a tear filled face she feels empty,all alone and she wonders if what she did was wrong If she had let him would he still be here now she would be happy and without a frown but she would have gone against herself for a guy that only wanted to use her in the end. she could find better and she shouldnt lose hope but right now all she wants is to be alone. [This message has been edited by drowningmonky (03-02-2006 05:47 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"for a guy that only wanted to use her in the end. she could find better and she shouldnt lose hope but right now all she wants is to be alone." seems to me the answer is right here... she made the right choice....being true to yourself, is always the right choice.. Welcome to Pip! *please check your email for a special greeting |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
I loved this poem. I can relate in a way with a guy who only wanted that from me. I'm not gonna say it's stupid... I'm not sure who'd I'd offend but everyone has their own standards and mine just happen to be a little higher than some peoples. She did make the right choice if that's all he wanted. because if he really loved her.. he could wait. I loved this Hope to hear some more like this.. ~Heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
I agree with both of you. Jessica |
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