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the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

0 posted 2006-02-27 06:56 PM

Drowning in the words
of anger and despair...
dwelling in a place
that was never really there.

Holding who I am
and where I want to be...
believing that I can
never became a part of me.

The silence is screaming
words I never meant to say...
and though you cannot hear them
I'm hurting anyway.

On a bed of broken dreams
I lay holding pieces of my heart...
time consumed by crimson tears
and a memory made art.

Looking into your eyes
you too, are about to slip...
but the confession's never made
(words bleeding from my lips)

My eyes are burning
the pillow case is wet...
cold wind through my window,
it's so hard to forget.

Drowning in my tears
of sorrow and despair...
knowing what you feel
but trying not to care.

Holding to what is left of me
not knowing why it happened this way...
wishing 'once upon a time'
but waiting on another yesterday.

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-02-27 09:50 PM

you have NO problem ryming! Very nice writing. Brovo!

I like this stanza :

"Holding who I am
and where I want to be...
believing that I can
never became a part of me."

Its very true. I'm sure a few of us at least have felt this way sometime in our life.

            xoxo
           Jessica
              :)

       Where your heart lays
        is where you belong.

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

2 posted 2006-02-28 11:34 AM

Wow!!!!!!! I LOVE this poem. I really don't often come upon a poem that I really really love but I can completely relate to this.

"believing that I can
never became a part of me."

It reminds me so much of everything I've been through, and everything I write about.

Great writing.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

3 posted 2006-02-28 04:58 PM

Thank you so much for your comment. This is my newest poem. I wrote it about a month or so ago. THings are going better now. lol thanks again for your comment. i love to hear what people think.. good or bad..

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

4 posted 2006-03-01 09:18 PM

My eyes are burning
the pillow case is wet...
cold wind through my window,
it's so hard to forget.
wow i love this poem........really i do! its amazing

x0x0
Free_Spirit07
fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here!

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