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the_girl_next_door
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0 posted 2006-02-27 06:48 PM


Time was standing still,
tears were held in.
Life was falling around her,
and silence would never end.
Broken heart and tattered wings,
the silence screaming lies
a bitter sweet reflection,
staring in her eyes.
Trembling hands,
and awaken dreams.
Drowning tears,
with memory.
Fallen from her pedestal,
this ANGEL'S eyes did fill,
but no one saw her crying...
for time was standing still.


Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

[This message has been edited by the_girl_next_door (02-27-2006 09:47 PM).]

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1 posted 2006-02-27 09:44 PM


Its nice. Ilike it. very nice write

            xoxo
           Jessica    
              :)

       Where your heart lays
        is where you belong.

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2 posted 2006-02-27 11:22 PM


oops sorry must edit my post              
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

Free_Spirit07
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3 posted 2006-03-01 09:12 PM


Hmm intresting poem.....i felt like i was in it! It pulled me in

x0x0
Free_Spirit07    
fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here!

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