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Teen Poetry #7

Heart and Head

xox.ice.cream.lover.xox
Junior Member

since 2006-01-07

Posts 20
Canada

0 posted 2006-02-26 01:25 PM

You smile at me,
  And my heart is melting--
You walk my way,
  And my body's shaking...

Words pour out your mouth,
  And I'm frozen there numb--
I try to say something back,
  But the words just won't come...

You were always there for me,
  Forever guiding my way--
Your words so sweet, smile so warm,
  Brightening up my day...

I never really repaid you,
  For the things you did and said--
So I'm telling you now, no regrets,
  I love you, from my heart and head.

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-02-26 07:12 PM

wow.. i like it. very good . these stanzas are wonderful:
"You smile at me,
  And my heart is melting--
You walk my way,
  And my body's shaking...

Words pour out your mouth,
  And I'm frozen there numb--
I try to say something back,
  But the words just won't come..."

it is an attention getter. nice write

            xoxo
           Jessica
              :)

       Where your heart lays
        is where you belong.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

2 posted 2006-02-28 10:08 PM

I love this. I agree this first line completely got my attention. Great job. I hope to hear more.

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

3 posted 2006-03-01 09:28 PM

I too agree......very nice

x0x0
Free_Spirit07
fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here!

littlemiss
Junior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 16

4 posted 2006-03-02 03:42 PM

I really enjoyed reading this poem, it flows beautifully

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