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Teen Poetry #7

Life All Alone

XxnoraxX
Member

since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

0 posted 2006-02-05 06:52 PM

She makes her own food
She cleans her own room

She makes money by working
She is pretty and charming

Everything is going her way
by no one to talk to; nothing to say

Sure it looks like she has a perfect life
But she's all alone and dying

She has the same routine for many years
She smiles a fake smile and cries real tears

20 years later, she dies all alone
They bury her soul with her bones

No one is gonna remeber her at all
Yet she saw and heard everything without a call

Dont live your life all alone
Meet someone and live life before its done

Hope you all liked it!
XxnoraxX

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

1 posted 2006-02-05 07:42 PM

Wow sounds just like me, good poem

x0x0
Free_Spirit

XxnoraxX
Member

since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

2 posted 2006-02-06 06:46 PM

Thanks for replying!

XoXo,
XxnoraxX

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

3 posted 2006-03-01 09:01 PM

hey,

I really like this poem. It shows a great message.

Keep it up.

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

4 posted 2006-03-01 10:14 PM

Wow. nice. real good. wonderful. Fantastic. A very nice write if I do say so my self

           Jessica
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

xolilmiztutuxo
New Member

since 2006-02-27

Posts 3
D-town *:* ma*:*

5 posted 2006-03-01 10:35 PM

thats cute well written ur from MA 2!!

mal

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