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Teen Poetry #7

Why Don't You Like Me!?!

littlelauren
Junior Member

since 2005-12-30

Posts 25

0 posted 2006-01-06 05:03 PM

I told you I liked you
as more than a mate
I thought you'd be glad
and we could date

You didn't want that
and now your causing me pain
I'm really hurting
it's driving me insane!

I don't even know
why I like you
your not that cute
but still I do

ok.. maybe you are
and I'm just in denial
that I've been rejected
and now I feel vile

Why don't you like me
can you tell me that?
I just want to know
what are you at!?!

I now can't get you off my mind
I think about you 24/7
I really like you
you're like something from heaven

Other people don't see it
but I do
don't you understand
I really like you!

You tell me you like me as a mate
so you shouldn't want to hurt me
but still you do
why are you doing this to me?
is it to see how much I cry
or hurt?
you know I like you
you're now making me feel like dirt!

I don't deserve this!
I know I don't
but I can't help feeling the pain
forget you I won't

because you'll always be there
even if it's just a small part
because I have feelings for you
so you'll always be in my heart!

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2006-02-13 05:15 PM

Oh, do I know how you feel... It's a pain I know. I really like your poem though, good job.
Stepharoo

EagletonDiva
Member

since 2006-01-11

Posts 107

2 posted 2006-02-15 12:00 PM

Oh, the difficulties of life, to love one so blind, or to want what we cannot have. It's amazing how often we can break our own hearts against someone who doesn't even know we exist. Good work

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

3 posted 2006-02-19 05:28 PM

I have totally been where you are now... wonderful poem

Where your heart lays is where you belong.

littlemiss
Junior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 16

4 posted 2006-03-02 03:49 PM

This is an excellent poem, i love the way you make it so easy for us to relate with you, it really struck a chord with me!

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