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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
you'v gone again and left me pain will I ever figure out your game? I waited and waited for the day when we would meet, and finish your game but you won again, and now I got this pain a pain of not knowing how or why you make me cry every night I wonder how and if i'll ever win your game and how to play give me a chance and we will start again give me the dice and i'll roll your turn now its happening again your ahead and im your aim I really don't think I will see you again so here is my chance to say you sunk my ship it's all in bits you won your game and im going insane i'll leave it here till we meet up in the place where God will lead the way! Goodbye Nick !!! Im shore we will meet again... p.s this is bout my brother! |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
its good. just really confusing. but i like how you incorporated different games into it. like battleship. I ask why, but in my mind, |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
I like it i had too read it a few times before I got it . Im sorry about your loss. I reeally like the way you put the gane into you poem. nice write  Jessica |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Oh really? im sorrrrrrryyyyyy  umm yh real sorry!x0x0 |
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