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Teen Poetry #7

one night stand.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2006-02-21 08:09 PM

my eyes
try to hide
the memory of you.

its amazing what a few drinks
and a blanket can land you.
the shame
the anger
the resentment

but not of you.
no,
not of you.
of my intoxication
and irrationalization.

each time its a different room,
different person,
different drink,
different rationalization.
same outcome.

"thnx kid"
...
your welcome.

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

Sexy
Member

since 2005-11-25

Posts 53

1 posted 2006-02-21 08:40 PM

this is so true..... nice write....
Lexy

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

2 posted 2006-02-22 06:13 PM

this is good. really good. nice write

            Jessica
              :)

       Where your heart lays
        is where you belong.

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

3 posted 2006-02-22 11:46 PM

Nice poem

x0x0
Free_Spirit07
fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here!

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

4 posted 2006-02-24 02:37 PM

A simplistic yet powerful piece. I like how you kept the words few but chose them purposefully.

An emotional piece. The frustration and bitterness is quite evident.

~Daniel?Titus

Fighting the good fight, deployed to Iraq.

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

5 posted 2006-02-24 04:39 PM

kissa this is a really powerful piece

how did you break my heart when it wasn't whole to start?

aol sn- tearsoflove13762

ShelbyLynn13
Member

since 2006-02-15

Posts 73
US, Colorodo

6 posted 2006-02-24 07:50 PM

that is so true nice write!!

TTYL shelby

every one is special in their own way!!!

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

7 posted 2006-02-24 09:20 PM

woww Karissa. I loved this. This was sooo good. Question, Is Irrationalization actually a word? 'Cause I think it's my new favorite word.

"Thanks kid"

That was fantastic.

<3kerR

When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad I'm better.
Mae West

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