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Teen Poetry #7

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helenadepp
Member

since 2006-01-16

Posts 59
durham, england

0 posted 2006-02-22 12:08 PM

These changes are suppose to be good
But the benefits are unclear
Do I need you?
I’m trying like everyone says I should
I’m worse than I appear
Do I need you?

I’m trying to juggle my feelings
Too many, that I love
Do I need someone?
I want someone to heal me
As push comes to shove
Do I need someone?

I’m trying to be me
But i'm not sure what “me” is anymore
Do I need anyone?
It’s too complicated to see
These voices i’m trying to ignore
Do I need anyone?

Too many opinions cloud my mind
My perception of people changing
I need you….
Searching for something I have to find
As positions are rearranging
I need you….

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-02-22 06:29 PM

i like. it flows very well. Is very true. sometimes too much advice and opinions can take over you and cover what you need to diside for yourself. I really like this stanza" I’m trying to be me
But i'm not sure what “me” is anymore
Do I need anyone?
It’s too complicated to see
These voices i’m trying to ignore
Do I need anyone?"
Yeah its really cool

            Jessica
              :)

       Where your heart lays
        is where you belong.

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

2 posted 2006-02-22 11:53 PM

It is very c00l, i like them lines as well!

x0x0
Free_Spirit07
fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here!

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