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Daily reminders |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Every month I count the days, That we are now spending apart, All the pain that once was their, Now just a memory in our past, From that day on, you left my house, And made me feel as IfI was wrong, I tried and cried to make you mine, But you never heeded my calls, It’s been just over six months now, Our anniversary of separation, Many people celebrate their love, While I cry thinking in dismay, No longer is our love a proof, Of a life we could have lead, Instead I look back on that day, When no tears we spared, One last time, we came together, How sad was the day that you showed up, Only to leave each other’s company, Last kiss shared, as we fled. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
I love this-its sad and has a GREAT flow  x0x0 |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
i like it. i agree it does have a really nice flow. good write  brovoJessica  Where your heart lays is where you belong. [This message has been edited by latteaddict213 (02-27-2006 11:03 PM).] |
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