Teen Poetry #7 |
"LIFE" without "U" |
Un-oRdiNaRy New Member
since 2006-02-15
Posts 1philippines |
They say that "LIFE" is nothing without "U" How come it's nothing,when there's really no "U" in "LIFE" "LIFE" can stand alone without "U" Coz "LIFE" has "I" and doesnt need "U" But what if "F" leaves "LIFE" coz "I" said so and want "U"? But "I" cant have "U" in "LIFE" And its impossible to have "U" in "LIFE" Whats left in "LIFE" without "U" is "LIE" Can "U" and "I" handle the "LIE" in "LIFE"? OR can "I" handle the "LIFE" with "LIE" and without "U"? One thing "I" know is that "I" want "U" to be in "LIFE" even though its a 2LIE". Coz "I" dont want "LIFE" with "LIE" and without "U"....... ------ coz in my life with LIEs, "I" love "U" ------> igie_08 <----------- |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
wow okay then, i like it x0x0 |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
WOAH!!! this must have taken forever! This is rly amazing- great first post and welcome to PIP! Have fun and keep it up- XoXo, |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
Thats very creative and totally cool it must of taken you ages to complete it. did it? Where your heart lays is where you belong. |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
I liked this alot. I had to get really close to the computer and read it with a steady pace to get what you were saying lol but it was a very creative way of using words and letters. Hope to hear more ~Heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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