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Teen Poetry #7

"LIFE" without "U"

Un-oRdiNaRy
New Member

since 2006-02-15

Posts 1
philippines

0 posted 2006-02-17 06:11 AM

They say that "LIFE" is nothing without "U"
How come it's nothing,when there's really no "U" in "LIFE"
"LIFE" can stand alone without "U"
Coz "LIFE" has "I" and doesnt need "U"
But what if "F" leaves "LIFE" coz "I" said so and want "U"?
But "I" cant have "U" in "LIFE"
And its impossible to have "U" in "LIFE"
Whats left in "LIFE" without "U" is "LIE"
Can "U" and "I" handle the "LIE" in "LIFE"?
OR can "I" handle the "LIFE" with "LIE" and without "U"?
One thing "I" know is that "I" want "U" to be in "LIFE" even though its a 2LIE". Coz "I" dont want "LIFE" with "LIE" and without "U".......
------ coz in my life with LIEs, "I" love "U"

------> igie_08 <-----------

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

1 posted 2006-02-17 02:39 PM

wow okay then, i like it

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Free_Spirit07
fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here!

XxnoraxX
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since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

2 posted 2006-02-17 10:43 PM

WOAH!!! this must have taken forever! This is rly amazing- great first post and welcome to PIP! Have fun and keep it up-

XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

3 posted 2006-02-18 01:17 PM

Thats very creative and totally cool it must of taken you ages to complete it. did it?

Where your heart lays is where you belong.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

4 posted 2006-02-27 06:35 PM

I liked this alot. I had to get really close to the computer and read it with a steady pace to get what you were saying lol but it was a very creative way of using words and letters.

Hope to hear more

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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