Teen Poetry #7 |
Lonely |
sometimesitslonely Junior Member
since 2005-12-27
Posts 41USA |
I know I've got some work to do, but I don't think there's no getting over you, not this time. What are scars if they don't bleed? Why stay if it means I've got to leave? If you no longer love me then, I think maybe you should go, take the highway to where? God only knows. Because I hate seeing reminders of our old love, on the ground and broken up. Maybe it's best, if this converstation ends, forget being friends, because I know the effects of your love. Lonely, you were, you've been, my one and only. This smile is fake, |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
I love this, nice flow x0x0 |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
its very good. i like it. your poemflows very well. Jessica |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
I loved this. I can relate. When someone says they want to be just friends it's hard because you know just seeing them reminds you of what you had. It sucks in reality. Nice write ~Heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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