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Teen Poetry #7

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xox.ice.cream.lover.xox
Junior Member

since 2006-01-07

Posts 20
Canada

0 posted 2006-01-08 04:33 PM

Now I realize I never meant much to you
Now I finally see in a different point of view
I was just a friend; maybe not even
I dont' really know what to believe in

I think of all our old memories
Were they real? Tell me please
I guess I still like you, subconsciously
But that's not what I'd like to believe

I'd like to make you everything
To talk to you and see what love can bring
But I guess I'm just too afraid
Of entering another love charade

Somehow my questions stop circling inside my head
And I almost forgot all the things you said
Everything you do is making my heart soare
Soar or sore...? I don't really care - not anymore.

acid_tears_i_cry
Junior Member

since 2005-11-25

Posts 24
United States, UT

1 posted 2006-02-21 12:15 PM

This is really good...verry east to comprehend too...good job keep it up

Can you read the word "loneliness" and not think of a dark room?

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

2 posted 2006-02-21 02:18 PM

Great job-I like this!

x0x0
Free_Spirit07
fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here!

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

3 posted 2006-02-21 07:24 PM

Nice write I like it

            Jessica
              :)

       Where your heart lays
        is where you belong.

helenadepp
Member

since 2006-01-16

Posts 59
durham, england

4 posted 2006-02-22 12:10 PM

Really enjoyed this, keep it up!

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

5 posted 2006-02-27 06:19 PM

"but I guess I'm just too afraid, of entering another love charade" This is a great line. too often it is true. Fear is what holds people back. I can relate. I love this poem. It was great..

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

byski
Member

since 2006-01-26

Posts 235
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2006-02-27 07:50 PM

great ending

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