Teen Poetry #7 |
No good so nd so :@ |
Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
I want to be able to tell you, There is something you need to know. I'm not sure if you are aware, But this boy has got to go. I'm saying this because I'm your friend, You could do so much better. I don't want to look back and think, "She fell for him, and you let her" He only wants one thing, To this you seem totally blind, I know it must be hard for you, But this "lover" is messing with your mind. It might seem like the real thing, As though without him you can't go on. The truth is that you're a strong girl, I'll be there when the road is long. Here I am when you need me, I'm not going to tell you what to do, You can learn from your mistakes, But I am here to help you through. For My Best Friend, I Only Mean Well. Belinda xx |
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ShelbyLynn13 Member
since 2006-02-15
Posts 73US, Colorodo |
WOW!! ive been in that same predicament. when my friends fall for the wrong guy and your not sure how to tell them! only because you are afraid that they will get angry. but that isn't a reason not to tell them. every one is special in their own way!!! |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Yes same here! Its hard but maybe, maybe she does need to learn from her mistakes ... think of it as when she is older she will remember how hurt she was and think harder! Hopfully that is what will happen...and im glad you are there for her "good on ya" x0x0 |
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helenadepp Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 59durham, england |
This has a really good flow to it well done! |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
Yeah it's true. U gotta let her make her own mistakes and let her learn from them. Your main focus is to support her as best you can now and when that time finally comes let your loyal friendship shine. U never know, it may just be all in your head unless you have concrete proof. |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
This is awesome-flows great and i just luv it- u r soooo talented- ur friend should be happy u care for her so great job for caring yea so keep it up! XoXo, |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
I have TOTALLY been in that spot I know how you feel |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
omg thanks for all the comments wow ! xD lol! i know this guy really is no good, everyone does she just doesn't seem to see it. I had a party and he took advantage of her, she can't even remember what happened and yet she still "loved" him. She really could do SO much better! It hurts to just have to watch, but mabye it's for the best. At least when she does find out she will learn and I'll be here xD lol that was long ! hehe ! Belinda x x |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
hey.. I loved this poem. I wrote one almost similar to this but I might post it later. I loved this piece honestly. and I hope to hear more. ~Heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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