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XxnoraxX
Member

since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

0 posted 2006-02-13 05:27 PM

Me and my girls are so tight
we have each others backs
forgive and forget when we have a fight

If you hurt one of us
you hurt all of us
its not worth the fuss

So if you mess with me
you mess with fire
but mess with my girls;
and your life expires

XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2006-02-13 05:29 PM

Haha, this is great... I have the same relationship with my girlfriends. We are so close, you mess with the bull you get the horns... Good job
Stephanie

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

2 posted 2006-02-13 11:41 PM

HeHe .... funni im liking it!

x0x0
Free_Spirit07

fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here!

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

3 posted 2006-02-16 03:13 PM

This is a good poem, I like the story behind the words. I might suggest adding to the poem if you could. It felt like, after I read it, that it was missing something. Unless you were going for the 'short' effect, I might try and increase it a several lives. Especially the third line, first stanza. Seems out of place.