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Sexy Member
since 2005-11-25
Posts 53 |
Life seems perfect like it was a dream.... But when i wake up its all gone.... When you drink to the bottom of that bottle it doesnt have the anwsers..... For the path you have chose thats seems right to you... Is not right for the lifes you have created... But you only think for you and not once for us.... Do we look stupid to you we know what you want.... Your freedom to not have us around..... well theres the door sorry for being in your way byebye Ma.... |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
This poem rocks! I loved it. Great job XxnoraxX |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
painful and sad...but very well said. |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Good job! x0x0 Free_Spirit07 |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
Just a question, why did you have 4 lines in all of the stanzas exept the last? The last has 7. Very nice write. Jessica |
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ShelbyLynn13 Member
since 2006-02-15
Posts 73US, Colorodo |
awesome write, i live with an alcoholic and i hate it she always trys to throw me and my mom out bbut she is the one that realy wants out! every one is special in their own way!!! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Well written poem. Hope to read more from you.  ~Alli~ |
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