Teen Poetry #7 |
My little secret... |
Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
Mabye my girlfriends are right, But I can't help the way I feel for you, Perhaps we are supposed to be friends, But I can't lie, you need the truth. Yes, I still have feelings for you, And yes I want to forget, No , Its not as easy as it sounds, But no it's not a regret. I enjoed the time we spent together, Arkward as it was, Strange though, don't ya think? How we've now, become so close. My feelings have become stronger, I'm not about to lie, I think there's still something there, But is it worth another try? I'm really not the loud type, By now I'm sure you know, I'll sit back and wait, Just stay quiet and lay low. Just wanted to let you know, Exactly how I feel, Shame I don't have the guts to tell you, That my feelings for you are real ! hmm...little soppy for my liking ! lol Belinda Black |
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helenadepp Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 59durham, england |
I love this! It has such a catchy beat which flows throughout. Applies to how im feeling at the moment aswell. Brilliant! |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
awesome and fresh-good write XoXo, |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Lovin it x0x0 Free_Spirit07 |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
Wow, I really like this. Somehow I find myself in this very situation... Great work, Steph |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
wonderful. very good. great. and alll those other nice things to say Jessica |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Ummm, I really liked this poem! I can relate to it in a lot of ways... There's a few words spelled wrong, and it doesn't always flow smoothly... You might want to try reading it out loud to yourself and seeing if you think there's room for improvment... Good job though! I really like the first part of the poem. @-->--- |
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