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Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

0 posted 2006-02-01 06:25 PM

Mabye my girlfriends are right,
But I can't help the way I feel for you,
Perhaps we are supposed to be friends,
But I can't lie, you need the truth.

Yes, I still have feelings for you,
And yes I want to forget,
No , Its not as easy as it sounds,
But no it's not a regret.

I enjoed the time we spent together,
Arkward as it was,
Strange though, don't ya think?
How we've now, become so close.

My feelings have become stronger,
I'm not about to lie,
I think there's still something there,
But is it worth another try?

I'm really not the loud type,
By now I'm sure you know,
I'll sit back and wait,
Just stay quiet and lay low.

Just wanted to let you know,
Exactly how I feel,
Shame I don't have the guts to tell you,
That my feelings for you are real !

hmm...little soppy for my liking ! lol

Belinda Black

helenadepp
Member

since 2006-01-16

Posts 59
durham, england

1 posted 2006-02-06 03:47 PM

I love this! It has such a catchy beat which flows throughout. Applies to how im feeling at the moment aswell. Brilliant!

XxnoraxX
Member

since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

2 posted 2006-02-11 11:58 AM

awesome and fresh-good write

XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

3 posted 2006-02-11 03:30 PM

Lovin it

x0x0
Free_Spirit07

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

4 posted 2006-02-13 05:11 PM

Wow, I really like this. Somehow I find myself in this very situation...
Great work,
Steph

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

5 posted 2006-03-09 02:53 PM

wonderful. very good. great. and alll those other nice things to say

           Jessica

    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

6 posted 2006-03-10 01:11 PM

Ummm, I really liked this poem! I can relate to it in a lot of ways...
There's a few words spelled wrong, and it doesn't always flow smoothly... You might want to try reading it out loud to yourself and seeing if you think there's room for improvment...

Good job though! I really like the first part of the poem.

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