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the sun |
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smiley New Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 9 |
Fiery red and golden orange, hues of pink and blue fill the sky. Silvery lines hold the clouds in the most beatiful shapes. As i look up to heaven i think of everything beatiful god created. as time passes the glowing ball surrounded by wonderful things begins to sink behind the gentle rolling hills of green. night follows as everything quiets down sleep is heard everywhere, everything getting ready to greet the sun in the morning. |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
yes, god created it........... |
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monkey Junior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 27 |
does your icon mean you dont like it or is that just your icon? |
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monkey Junior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 27 |
i thought it was a pretty good poem. |
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monkey Junior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 27 |
i am asking dunkcan idaho, if you like it or not? |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
every thing beautiful god created..... |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
it was pretty good...i didnt see much point in it, but the descriptions were good. now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very pretty...I love the sun.   ~ElizabethDreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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