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littlelauren
Junior Member

since 2005-12-30

Posts 25

0 posted 2006-01-06 05:40 PM

I cry myself to sleep
each night
wishing you were beside me
holding me tight

I know you don't want to
but I wish you would
hold me close to your chest
like you should

feelings like mine
for you
don't go away
what do i do

I can't keep crying
it's giving me a sore head
my pillow is soaked
and so is my bed

I can't get over you
so what should I do
should I tell you again?
I love you!

[This message has been edited by littlelauren (01-07-2006 06:40 PM).]

XxnoraxX
Member

since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

1 posted 2006-01-24 05:15 PM

This poem is soooo sad!
i rly like it
thanks for sharing it

-XxnoraxX

byski
Member

since 2006-01-26

Posts 235
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2006-01-28 03:21 AM

It felt good to write that didn't it. Keep em coming, I would like to hear some more of your thoughts and feelings.

littlemiss
Junior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 16

3 posted 2006-03-02 03:54 PM

I can really sense the sadness in this poem, it hits you as soon as you start reading it and you just want to make everything better for you, its a really good poem

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

4 posted 2006-03-02 07:45 PM

This is a really great poem. I love the emotion you put into it

keep it up...

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

5 posted 2006-03-04 11:36 PM

lots of emotion! good!

           Jessica
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

6 posted 2006-03-05 11:32 PM

I really like it. It shows a lot of sadness.

helenadepp
Member

since 2006-01-16

Posts 59
durham, england

7 posted 2006-03-06 03:10 PM

Keep your spirits up and it will all work out in the end, one way or another. Good write!

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