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Teen Poetry #7
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troublebreathing
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since 2005-11-25
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0 posted 2005-11-25 02:20 AM

All you do is complicate my mind
And make me fall for those charming smiles of yours
And once again these self-made concrete barriers,
Shatter and crumble,
But this time
My body's too battered
And my body's too bruised
To once again endure the relentless let-downs
I allow you to hand to me
Each moment that we meet,

And now the salty droplets
Pour freely from my veins
And drown me from your lucid intentions
I know only too well,

As these waves of tears embody this room,
A smile creeps upon my face,
For I know
This end to my grievings
Suits me better than a lifetime spent
Remaining in this volatile circle.
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1 posted 2005-11-25 06:44 AM

I remember all too well, this kind of pain...
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2 posted 2005-11-25 03:24 PM

This was a little hard to read cause it made me remember that type of pain
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