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DestinedSuccess
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since 2005-11-16
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0 posted 2005-11-16 12:46 PM



As I look into the mirror
I see to my suprise
A totally different person
Staring deep into my eyes
The carefree little girl
I once saw at four and five
Has now become a young woman
Fighting to survive
In the madness that surrounds me everyday
Its frightning to think
I could be killed for what I say
It's scary how time flies by so fast
And what I once called my present
Has now bcome my past

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-11-16 09:47 AM


Destined~
Welcome to PiP's poetic circle~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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2 posted 2005-11-16 10:38 AM


I like this very much...what a great first post! Welcome to pip!

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DestinedSuccess
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since 2005-11-16
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3 posted 2005-11-17 05:40 PM


thankyou for all your comments
Sexy
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4 posted 2005-11-25 03:20 PM


I like it...its pretty good...
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